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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Aug 26, 2016 14:04:49 GMT -6
Clams Love My Soupy Yumminess!
SMALC
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Zucriy Amsuna
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Aug 26, 2016 14:03:37 GMT -6
You need to accidentally the can. (Is this dangerous?)
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Zucriy Amsuna
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Zucriy Amsuna
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Aug 12, 2016 10:47:24 GMT -6
Granted! But now you can't speak, write, or coherently type anything.
I wish I had a real Death Note.
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Zucriy Amsuna
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Zucriy Amsuna
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Aug 12, 2016 10:41:11 GMT -6
People
Pretty
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Aug 8, 2016 13:23:11 GMT -6
Roast
Chicken
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Aug 8, 2016 13:21:22 GMT -6
Morbid And Xanthic Water Eats Lanky Lions.
ITSALIV
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Aug 8, 2016 13:12:59 GMT -6
He Outrageously Underestimates National Dictatorship.
TATOR
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Aug 8, 2016 13:05:40 GMT -6
First, I'll say that there's no need to feel intimidated! ^_^ Poetry is poetry; all forms are allowed here. I just wanted to write using some of my favourite styles. I'll explain them to help you understand. The haiku and tanka are simple; they just require counting syllables. Five on the first line, seven on the second, and five again on the third. The tanka then has two more lines of seven syllables each. You don't need to worry about anything else. The rhyme scheme I put up there is ABABCC. This means the last words of each line rhyme with the corresponding line of the same letter. So A rhymes with A ("ahead" and "red" in my poem). These kinds of poems typically follow a rhythm; this is the hard part, and I understand that some people have trouble with it. I can't even get a good rhythm sometimes. In my poem above, I use iambic tetrameter, which means there are four beats per line. I'll show you the first line, for example; the capital letters are where the beats are. she WALKS the GARden PATH aHEAD The rest of the lines are similar, except the second line starts with a beat ("REAdy"), but I couldn't think of a way to fix that at the time. I hope that helped at least a little. You seem to like free verse more, and that's fine. Just as its name implies, it has a lot more freedom, and you can do whatever you want. In my opinion, that is the heart of poetry as well as prose. Plus, you can break off each line whenever you feel it should be broken off, or you can even make pictures with the words! Expand your poetry! You're only limited by your imagination. There's no need to follow known conventions, styles, and forms; just write, let it flow, and have fun!
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Jul 26, 2016 11:36:07 GMT -6
It's a slightly glowing face of Miriam. 5/7, pretty good.
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Jul 26, 2016 11:34:40 GMT -6
Thinking Unusually, Everybody Shunned Daily Activities Yesterday.
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Jul 26, 2016 11:30:52 GMT -6
(Hmm...is this letter combination inspired by Tales of Symphonia? =P Amazing game.)
The Little Outlander Startled Me.
MRWND
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Jul 26, 2016 11:28:03 GMT -6
Block
Screw
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Jul 26, 2016 11:23:20 GMT -6
Granted! You now have a complete collection of every Nintendo console, game, accessory, and anything else Nintendo-related. It is on display in a huge impossibly impervious glass box wherever you wish. However...you can never get to it; it's truly impenetrable. And the sun will slowly discolour everything within.
I wish sleeping and eating were entirely optional for me so I can have more time every day to do what I want.
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Jul 22, 2016 8:11:52 GMT -6
Brothers
Mother
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Jul 22, 2016 8:10:19 GMT -6
Granted! Unfortunately, lightning is still lethal to you. In the end, your life doesn't change at all.
I wish I could wrap myself in non-spreadable blue fire that is constantly 70 degrees (F) and perfectly safe for living and non-living things.
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Jul 20, 2016 11:04:20 GMT -6
Granted! You become a fish while not being near a body of water. You suffocate within minutes.
I wish the Sweet Meteor O'Death came and destroyed humanity.
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Jul 19, 2016 13:57:10 GMT -6
Bits
Cold
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Jul 18, 2016 7:39:58 GMT -6
Zesty Obese Bums Eat Kimchi.
JESTR
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Jul 15, 2016 8:47:24 GMT -6
Moon
Crystal
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Post by Zucriy Amsuna on Jul 15, 2016 8:45:50 GMT -6
Friends Infect Our Rational Aloofness.
(Wow, this is one of my favourite lines now! xD Great for introverts like me.)
ALOOF
Edit: You can thumbs up your own post...
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